Fellowship of Reconciliation

2008 Peace Essay Contest

 
 

Eligibility

Students are eligible to participate if they are in grades nine through twelve on April 4th, 2008.

Rules and Guidelines

  • All submissions must contain between 500 and 1000 words

  •  Your entry must address only one of the two essay questions.

  • We encourage you to first review the many historical examples of nonviolent solutions to international crises in the last century—e.g., the Non Proliferation Treaty, The Arias Sánchez  Peace Plan, the Camp David Accords, and Solidarity.  Your essay must contain a bibliography that lists at least two sources. One of the sources must be a source other than the internet. Encyclopedia citations are prohibited.

  • The essay must reflect original thought.  Any essay that appears to plagiarize or contains information from someone else without proper documentation will be disqualified. Decisions by the judges will be final.

  • All submissions must include a word count, excluding the list of sources.

  • Do not place your name or your school’s name on any of the pages of the essay itself.  All identifying information should be listed on the cover sheet, which should be page one of the essay file you submit.

  • Submit your essay electronically to foressaycontest@gmail.com

  • All essay material will become the property of The Fellowship of Reconciliation and will not be returned to the owner.

Judging

  • Analysis: Considers how well your arguments are supported.  Are the discussion points argued coherently and supported with research and reasonable explanations?  Is the evidence convincing and supported by professional expertise?  Does the essay show attention to possible negative consequences of the new alternative, and address ways to mitigate them

  • Voice:   Considers how well your writing engages the reader.  Is the essay compelling and engaging?  Is there a flow that keeps the reader engaged throughout the entire text?
  • Style and Mechanics:  Examines how well the essay is written in terms of grammar, spelling, punctuation, and sentence construction. An excellent essay has a certain eloquence, style, and rhythm as the result of word choice, and literary convention that makes the writing palatable and engages the reader.

Getting it there

All entries must be e-mailed to foressaycontest@gmail.com

no later than April 4th, 2008

Notification of Winners

All students submitting an essay will receive an e-mail from F.O.R. before the end of the 2007-2008 school year.  If you are a winner, the letter will contain instructions as to how you will receive your prize.  

Suggestions

Your essay should contain the following:

 

  • An introduction, which introduces the subject and contains an explanation of your position.  The objective is to demonstrate that you understand the essay contest question and have formed a response to it.
  • A body, which develops your argument using research and analysis.  The process of analysis should include facts and historical research that support your argument.  The body should also contain a detailed explanation of why your strategy will result in a safer, more peaceful, and more secure world.  Expert opinions of government officials, military personal, or professionals with expertise in the area of foreign policy are also acceptable, but the focus is on your original thinking and analysis.
  • A conclusion, which summarizes the research and analysis presented in the essay.  Drawing on ideas already presented, you should demonstrate that your conclusions support the position you put forward in the opening paragraphs.  Your aim is to convince the reader that your position is reasonable and valid.

 

Judging

When FOR judges evaluate your essay, they will have the following rubric in mind:

 

  • Focus:  Examines how well your essay responds to the question while avoiding violence, and war in particular, as a solution.  Does the essay provide a specific and thorough response to the entire question?
  • Organization:  Looks at the structure of your essay.  Does the essay have a well-defined introduction, body, and conclusion?

   Cover Sheet:

Your cover sheet must include the following information;

 

The Title of your Essay

Your Name

Your date of birth

E-mail address

School’s name

Grade level

Teacher’s name, if applicable

 

The following statement should also be included on the cover sheet; 

 

I certify that this essay is my own work and that I have abided by all the guidelines and requirements of the Fellowship of Reconciliation Peace Essay Contest.  I understand that the essay will not be returned to me and will become the property of Fellowship of Reconciliation to use at its discretion.  I understand that the judges’ decisions are final. 

 

 

Your Name & your signature


QUESTIONS

Choose one question and answer that question as thoroughly as possible.

Please read the rules and guidelines before you begin.

 

Question 1: Nuclear Arms Problem

Background:

          The United States has move than one-half of the world's nuclear warheads.  However, many nuclear warheads—and nuclear technologies-- are in the hands of less stable countries such as India, Pakistan, and North Korea. Furthermore, the United States, Russia and China now have delivery systems that could destroy whole continents in the event of a nuclear exchange.

Question:

          What strategies or approach would you recommend as an advisor to the U.S. President to reduce the current and long-term threat of a nuclear disaster?

 

Question 2:  Iran

Background:

          The current U.S. administration has raised concerns about Iran, some that have a basis in fact and some that have not been supported by international observers. Currently, fundamentalist President Ahmadinejad is calling for the destruction of Israeli Government, advocates the enrichment of weapons-grade uranium, and has been accused of supporting various political and military destabilizing movements throughout the Middle East.

Question:

          If you were an advisor to the next U.S. President, how would you propose we engage Iran in a process that would reduce the level of conflict in the Middle East and result in a peaceful, more stable region?

 

How would you apply nonviolent conflict resolution to . . .

  •  continuing nuclear arms proliferation?

  •  Iran’s role in the conflict in the Middle East?

What should we do now?

 

Essay Winners Will Receive

 

                    1st place winner $200

2nd place winner $150

3rd place winner $100

4th and 5th place winners $50 each

 

SUBMISSION DEADLINE: April 4th, 2008


 

 Thanks for entering and Good Luck!

 

*Louisville Peace Action Community (LPAC)

is a new co-sponsor this year